Hello guys...I wrote this one randomly for some creative writing community on orkut...no thought went into it..as is evident..just a fun filled exercise to water my otherwise dried brain cells. Criticism is welcome...for I'm aware of the quality of this one..but ooo just writing this was so much fun!!! Anyways...here goes...
Don't use your brains
if your aint got some
don't try to speak
when your aint got words
don't gimme bullshit
coz it aint gonna work
life might give you a raw deal
or your luck might be bathing in the rain with my cars wheel
losing might be your second name
and tears your best friend
but don't dare gimme bullshit
coz it aint gonna work...i swear it aint gonna work
bullshit, satan queen
Thursday, October 11, 2007
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18 comments:
how bout cowshit.. will tht work :P
hehe... nice one..satan..
heheh...hmmm...yup...that might work! heheh..thanks shashi :)
someone actually commented on this?!!! :D (guess it pays to be a girl. psst...queen...how much?)
thanks for chipping in and making a dull day end with a bright spark in the northern sky ;)
nice work, and it personifies the topic quite well. complete justice!! [please read: ...or luck might be bathing in the rain with my cars wheel...avant garde!]
hehehe, thanks :)
bulllllllllllll shitttt....
well it was nice bull shit poem... a respect to so many bulls roaming around on indian roads.. hahaha
well it was really nice yaar..
hi @pulsespeak...thanks for your comments...avant garde...well..i dont know about that ! but good comments always bring a smile! :)
hi @ashish...well...I really think i made a blunder by not dedicating this poem to the endless bulls roaming around the streets of india! ...thanks! :)
This is the best one I have read in ur blog...I am not getting romantic about the verses but actually I am going thru a nonsense which wants me utter these verses...keep on doing justice to your name...Satan queen.
Why write bullshit when you can write good poetry :)
Why write bullshit when you can write good poetry :)
hey actually u make a great poet.. keep going!! i enjouyed l ur posts!!!
hey vinod...as i mentioned i wrote dis poem as an exercise...but thanks!
hi meenakshi...thanks a lot! the encouragement keeps me going. :)
You got a nice poem there..
But this is my take..
Do use your brains
If you cant borrow some
Do try to speak
Otherwise u r a dumb duck
nice one,,
hey nice work......i hav a very similar blog...
http://www.deathlycatacombs.blogspot.com/
...hope to meet u there
hey... im really impressed with your blog... great job keep it up...
Found your blog through google,
I have this fledgling musical-startup which needs people like you to spread the insanity and music. Hope you visit and drop your suggestions.
http://kroomsa.com/
http://kroomsa.blogspot.com/
Regards,
Aakanksha Gaur
Operations Head,
Kroomsa :)
thanks a ton guys! encouragement works as my daily dose of water air n....ya lots more that i need for living! cheerio!
p.s- sorry..i have been too irregular...but blame the office hours! promise to be back soon ...with more shitty crappy stuff!
not that bad,
i found an intensity in that small little piece, which connected somewhere
Nice blogs
@mangal- thanks man!
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