Wednesday, September 26, 2007

An Angel














Dejection sitting on my doorstep
And pain waiting by my bed
To make love to me
Standing alone I wondered
Pathless and aimless
Where to turn to
To whom to rely on

Time wont stop for none
It wont for me either
Chaos all around
Order broken at various junctions
Standing alone I wondered
Pathless and aimless
Where to turn to
To whom to rely on

My life in a mess
With nowhere to turn to
Finding myself like a rocky shore
Distanced from the world
Standing alone I wondered
Pathless and aimless
Nowhere to turn to
To whom to rely on

I found an angel
Innocent of all evils
Sublime in his love
Blurred suddenly became clear
No more was I alone
I found the path and the aim
And he became someone
To whom I could turn to
To whom I could rely on…

15 comments:

S. said...

were u dejected...
before u realized u were?

Did u know u were pathless...
before u discovered the path?

Did u know u were lost..
before u found the rocky shore?

Did u know u were alone...
Before u found the angel?

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P.S : Angels are pretty messy things. They sit on your shoulder and pee. So beter watch out for some water on your shirt.

:)

satan' queen said...

eeeeksSS!!! dodoooo wll kill ya for dis!!! heheheh crazy pig! ..watch out.. satan queen iz out to kill ya!

Unknown said...

wow tht was too gud... many a times the most unexpected person gives us tht moment of happiness tht uve been longing for..
and ya seriously look for some water on ur shirt..:p lol...

satan' queen said...

@shashi...thnkssss!
P.S-...u wait too!! i hv got to kill "whim" n den next iz ur turn doc!

M A D said...

whew.. finally i hv got update from you.. but i cant belive it .. you are hard hitter.. pahli hi ball per six..

it was nice poem once again..

lovely post..

geeta k vachan satya ho gaye..

"sabr ka fal meetha hota hai"

hahah

rk rishikesh sinha said...

Dejection sitting on my doorstep
And pain waiting by my bed
To make love to me
Standing alone I wondered
Pathless and aimless
Where to turn to
To whom to rely on

FANSTASTIC.
THATS ALL

satan' queen said...

heylo guyz!
@ashish...thanks a ton for your encouraging remarks! Don't know if im worth it or not..but its always good to have some encouragement! Thanks again!

@axis! - hey rishi...thanks man...! :)

Sameera Ansari said...

A touching post;am sure it spoke out your mind for you at that time and took off a load once you wrote it!Ha ha.Anyways a cool blog with appreciable posts!Way to go gal :)

Jayasri said...

Hey satan queen,

Still falling in love with the verses, the way I did one and a half years back. God bless you forever buddy. Consistency is your blessed virtue.

Anand said...

i pledge fealty 2 thee :)
thankx 4 ur comments btw. if 1 of ur caliber appreciates my poem, my dream is fulfilled.
ne chance ur single? :)

SuRaJ... said...

hey devi(L)...felt nostalgic reading dis verse again after an year and half...keep writing, for blessed are those who can....

Abhishek said...

ah! the difference between imagination and reality.
i wish there really were angels.

aninda said...

i liked ur thoughts on dejection ,trust ..nice way to put thm .. more i enjoyed ppls comments

satan' queen said...

Thanks a lot you guys! Quiet overwhelmed with happiness...and the fact that im writing back so late doesnt make it any easy!

nains m said...

An angelic feeling of somebody who IS there.... was very well created!
Cute one!